Outtake from Blade of Empire
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I'm in the middle of the editorial revisions on BLADE OF EMPIRE, and as always, there are bits and pieces that end up on the cutting room floor, as it were. I thought you might enjoy seeing this one, since it doesn't involve spoilers.
The destruction of Farcarinon, and Prince Serenthon Farcarinon’s bid for the High Kingship, had been the greatest campaign young Prince Runacarendalur of Caerthalien had as yet been a part of, though he was a blooded knight with command of his own meisne. The Long Peace that followed the glories of that last wild campaign and its magnificent conclusion had grated on his nerves, and he’d sought diversion anywhere he could find it. He’d been hunting in Rimroheth Flower Forest—its trees were sacrosanct, not the animals who lived there—when he’d discovered one of his father’s secrets: Gunedwaen Swordmaster, Gunedwaen of Farcarinon, was alive.
Oh, he was bent and broken and maimed, but he lived. Runacar had thought himself very clever to return to Caerthalien Great Keep, dress himself in forester’s garb, and return to Rimroheth, presenting himself to Gunedwaen as Caren, a forester of Caerthalien. He’d been delighted when the old man fell for the deception—though as Runacar discovered later, Gunedwaen hadn’t been deceived for a moment—and returned to visit several times, always on the pretext of “seeking out good hunting for my lord of Caerthalien”. Farcarinon’s Swordmaster had been bitter and grieving, and hardly good company, though it had given Runacar an illicit thrill to meddle in one of his father’s secrets.
Until the day he had ridden into the clearing, and Gunedwaen had spoken before he even had a chance to dismount.
“Heir-Prince Runacarendalur of Caerthalien, do you truly believe Bolecthindial to be this much of a fool? He could not have brought Lord Serenthon down to death were that so.”
Runacar had frozen in place, unable to think of a word to say.
Gunedwaen had smiled in a way that had chilled Runacar’s hot blood. “Perhaps you can evade your father’s men if you leave now. Run, little rabbit. Run.”
Runacar had touched spurs to his palfrey’s flanks, and she had sprung into flight. He evaded the men his father had sent after him, but he did not evade his father’s punishment thereafter.
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He never saw Gunedwaen again, not even when Caerthalien went to war against Vieliessar Farcarinon, and did not know now whether the aged Swordmaster had lived or died.
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The destruction of Farcarinon, and Prince Serenthon Farcarinon’s bid for the High Kingship, had been the greatest campaign young Prince Runacarendalur of Caerthalien had as yet been a part of, though he was a blooded knight with command of his own meisne. The Long Peace that followed the glories of that last wild campaign and its magnificent conclusion had grated on his nerves, and he’d sought diversion anywhere he could find it. He’d been hunting in Rimroheth Flower Forest—its trees were sacrosanct, not the animals who lived there—when he’d discovered one of his father’s secrets: Gunedwaen Swordmaster, Gunedwaen of Farcarinon, was alive.
Oh, he was bent and broken and maimed, but he lived. Runacar had thought himself very clever to return to Caerthalien Great Keep, dress himself in forester’s garb, and return to Rimroheth, presenting himself to Gunedwaen as Caren, a forester of Caerthalien. He’d been delighted when the old man fell for the deception—though as Runacar discovered later, Gunedwaen hadn’t been deceived for a moment—and returned to visit several times, always on the pretext of “seeking out good hunting for my lord of Caerthalien”. Farcarinon’s Swordmaster had been bitter and grieving, and hardly good company, though it had given Runacar an illicit thrill to meddle in one of his father’s secrets.
Until the day he had ridden into the clearing, and Gunedwaen had spoken before he even had a chance to dismount.
“Heir-Prince Runacarendalur of Caerthalien, do you truly believe Bolecthindial to be this much of a fool? He could not have brought Lord Serenthon down to death were that so.”
Runacar had frozen in place, unable to think of a word to say.
Gunedwaen had smiled in a way that had chilled Runacar’s hot blood. “Perhaps you can evade your father’s men if you leave now. Run, little rabbit. Run.”
Runacar had touched spurs to his palfrey’s flanks, and she had sprung into flight. He evaded the men his father had sent after him, but he did not evade his father’s punishment thereafter.
He never saw Gunedwaen again, not even when Caerthalien went to war against Vieliessar Farcarinon, and did not know now whether the aged Swordmaster had lived or died.
Re: Question
Date: 2017-03-16 06:13 pm (UTC)Tiliparanwira is called "The Lost" because of its location in the Vale of Celenthodiel, a place the Elves thought to be mythical until Vieliessar rediscovered Amrethion's Crown City during the time of the Winter War. City, Flower Forest/s, and Shrine were all lost during the Fall of Celephriandullias (about which there will be more detail in SCOURGE OF FATE).
Since Tiliparanwira was rediscovered by Vieliessar, it is reasonable for it to be known in Kellen's time. Certainly the Shrine itself still exists in Kellen's time, since the Nine Shrines (or Land Shrines) cannot be destroyed. Whether it is still accessible, however, is another question. I suspect from its location that it is not, at least until the end of the Flower War.
(We really need a Wiki...)
Re: Question
Date: 2017-03-21 03:45 pm (UTC)Re: Question
Date: 2017-10-08 08:49 pm (UTC)Re: Question
Date: 2017-03-22 03:01 am (UTC)So apparently the shrines CAN be destroyed?
Furthermore, there must be more than nine shrines throughout the world? Because there are nine for each of the races of the world.
Re: Question
Date: 2017-10-08 09:08 pm (UTC)While the Shrines are nonce-named "Nine Shrines", the "Nine Races" are actually composed of more than nine sentient species, and this taxonomy excludes the Brightfolk. (Runacar finds this especially annoying.)
So when Idalia says "Most [of the Nine Shrines] had been erased in the aftermath of the Great War", it must be noted that the Shrines originally stretched from Great Sea Ocean to the Cold Sea, and a great deal of that landscape was turned to dust in the Second Endarkened War, so presumably those Shrines in the wasteland areas were either Tainted or drained of power.
Of course after the Great Flowering of Kellen's time, all of those Shrines were both cleansed and restored, so as the population of Jer-a-kaliel expands eastward, many of them are likely to be rediscovered by those races they originally belonged to.
I hope this helps answer your questions.
Wiki
Date: 2017-03-23 04:16 pm (UTC)obsidian-mountain.wikia.com
Any and all help is much appreciated.
Re: Wiki
Date: 2017-03-23 04:20 pm (UTC)I will dig out my style sheets for the first two trilogies, which have comprehensive lists of character names and a bit of information on them. Email me at merlinscribe-at-gmail-dot-com, please.
Is this a wiki that anyone can edit? I can let Tor know if so.
Re: Wiki
Date: 2017-03-23 05:10 pm (UTC)Re: Wiki
Date: 2017-03-23 06:22 pm (UTC)Re: Wiki
Date: 2017-10-08 09:19 pm (UTC)